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wonderful comment about songwriting is "great songs are not written,
they're rewritten. Any skill is not generally WONDERFUL with the 1st take.
Imagine making a movie and using only the 1st take of every scene. Imagine
how funny commercials would be if they insisted on using only the 1st take.
The peculiar thing is that we as songwriters often rely just on our
"1st take" as a finished product. Why do we do that? The reason I
believe that songwriters (self included) feel that we're special is that
once we get the initial inspiration, we've given birth to a song. How many
parents would take their 1st child or two and look at them and say
"you need a little work yet, I'll send you back and we'll try
again." LOL! That song that we began birthing is close to us and we now
begin treating it like a child. It's special, it's ours, we love it, and
it's perfect JUST THE WAY IT IS! ;-) Besides, it's cool to imagine being
interviewed and saying "Ohh, yea, that song of mine that has been #1
for the last 6 months was all written in 5 minutes. I write all my songs
like that."
Treating our initial song inspirations like our little children leads to
problems. We don't keep an open ear and consider critiques or input from
people very well anymore. We don't walk the floor thinking of better lines
anymore. We don't toy around with our music wondering if a better chord
progression could make the song stand out more. We've decided not to work on
the melody to make it more "catchy." Before you know it, this song
ends up in a collection of songs we like and wonder why no one else ever
liked it much. Again, no one can tell you your kid is a brat, err, or your
rhymes are a little cliché without us running out the door with our hands
over our ears at that point screaming "it's fine, it's fine, I like it
that way!"
What
if we took a different approach? What if we wrote our songs with the
intention of rewriting it? Hmm, that is a little different. It's kind of
like tricking yourself. You keep that intention and what happens is you
don't allow yourself to be nearly as attached as you were to the song
originally. I often do that with verses. I have a verse and it seems
"OK" but I don't want an "OK" song I want a very good
song I get to hear on the radio. ;-) So I say to myself, "I'm sure I'll
keep that 2nd verse, but just for kicks, just for something to do, I'm going
to write it a completely different way. I'm going to ditch this and do this
instead of that, etc." Many times I find that that old 2nd verse wasn't
that good after all and this new version is much better and tossing the old
verse 2 in the trash can now comes much easier.
When inspiration comes, don't slow it down by worrying about rhymes etc.
yet. Just get it all out on paper, tape etc. so that it all comes out. Then
after a day or so of tossing it around, go back to it and map it out. Map
out where the song needs to start, where it needs to lead the listener, and
where it needs to end. Be very tight with the focus of the song. You are now
on rewrite #1. You are now taking the "idea" and making it a song.
Now get away from it again. Print it out the next day and begin walking
around, driving around, sitting outside etc. reading / singing it through.
Be very careful not to get attached yet, think "I'm writing this with
the intention of rewriting this a couple more times." There's no
pressure on keeping current lines, keeping new lines etc., so you're free to
fool around. As you read and sing through it look for "speedbumps."
Speedbumps in your song are lines or phrases that just don't seem to flow
very good on your songs road. They draw attention to theirselves as being
cliché, unclear in meaning, not very vivid, etc. Take those "speedbumps,
those parts that you kind of, sort of wonder if it's that good, and magnify
them so you can wipe them out and the song soars from start to finish. Your
song deserves it. Don't make another "good" song, rewrite it and
make a great song. This will cover another few rewrites.
Look at your song and make sure it is strong in what I call the songwriting
triangle. #1 Des the lyric draw the listener in and unfold well. Good lyric
painting, focused, clear, etc. #2 Is the songs structure sound? Rhyme
scheme, etc. #3 Is it catchy? Hook VERY strong, chorus wraps it up, catchy
melody, progressions, musical parts, etc. that make people want to walk
around humming it for days saying "Help, I can't this song out of my
head!!!" LOL! That should give you another rewrite or two on your song.
At some point you've polished the car, I mean song, to a point where it's
time to stop admiring it and get in and drive. As with anything, don't go
completely overboard. Someday you're going to have to boot your little
child/song out of the nest and let it fly on it's own two wings. Sit back
then, and admire it, knowing you've done your best work on it.
The point is *you wrote the song with rewriting it in mind all along.* You
weren't so attached to it that you loved the 1st few lines that spilled out
onto paper and "had" to keep 'em. You did what was best for the
song.
About
the Author:
Dave Byers is the founder of "writingsongs.com
and the Christian
Songwriters Organization. He has been writing songs since 1979. His book
"Songwriting
fundamentals" is available by clicking here.
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